Monday, December 8, 2008

Shaved


BY CAROLE NICHOLS


Wet and hot in the middle of the forest,
Haunting cries in the distance beckoning;
The heady fragrance of the flowers,
The musky cavern of hidden secrets.
Yet you seek that gentle hill of delight.

A yielding mount in the fertile valley,
Awaiting a viewing by hungry eyes;
With the foliage swept away, it appears,
Flushed and alive, sweet beauty revealed;
Greedy and giving, awaiting a visitor.

And life's fountain pours over it,
Urging a drink of the gleaming nectar;
Silky smooth and and tempting to touch,
Captivating to the senses, sweet flesh;
Inviting you to linger in passion's fold.

5 comments:

  1. I'm not so old that I don't remember how nice it felt.

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  2. The contrast here is rather blinding.

    Maybe it would be nice to make the 'background' more grey...just a little extra light/white...

    It really does hurt the eyes, I think.

    I'm for making 'You' easier to read and this is so 'glaring.'

    Love the songs, by the way.

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  3. Michael Iceberg was his name.

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  4. Reminds me of Lightening and rain...

    Have you ever seen 'Ball Lightening'...

    I have...

    UFO?

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  5. I've never seen "ball" lightning, but I've had a ball feeling the lightning...does that count?

    UFO...maybe

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